grandaddy cain is a tall and indépendant black farmer, who dont need no man
similes-
*"looks like a plastic spiderweb"
*"...it really looked like the crystal paper weight granny kept in the parlor"
*"like it poured cider into the vats..."
metaphors-
*"...granny was, making the cakes drunk"
*"...we aint a bunch of trees"
*"...camera lassoed to his shoulder was buzzin' our way"
allusions-
*"...the way bingo does when you yell at him about the bones on the kitchen floor"
*racial slur "aunty", which was directed towards granny
*the camera men where shooting film for a movie against food stamps
symbol-
when the female chicken hawk was nailed to the door, the male hawk came and tried to help her escape
I'm not sure what "don't need no man" means. You might go further with the description of Granddaddy to include his strength: "he had motors in his hands and engines in his feet". Connect the symbol with Granny and Granddaddy Cain. Overall - good job!
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