In Ray Bradbury’s dystopian Novel, Fahrenheit 451, we are
given a warning of what’s to come if we trade thought engaging books and
teachings for five minute TV shows without the slightest plot and other
meaningless distractions. The character, Mildred, is the lead character, Montag’s,
nugatory shell of a wife who lets technology completely control her life and doesn’t
take the time to think about anything at all. She’s unable to feel passion due
to the plethora of sleeping pills the government supplies everyone and love is
a lost concept to her and she isn’t even aware of it. Looking at today, technology
is controlling our lives and we are all beginning to read less and less in
scientific studies. We are already losing culture, and actual meaning in leisure
like music and TV is becoming more and more vacant. We’re walking on a slippery
slope, and if we aren’t careful we could all slip and fall into that absent-mindedness
Ray Bradbury portrays in Mildred.
Hi Zach! This paragraph represents a good analysis of the book, but your THESIS should only be one sentence. Try to narrow it down. Take a look at the questions which Mr. Fielding posted on the blog for this writing project. Try writing a thesis as a direct response to one of those questions. A thesis is the main (or central) argument of your whole paper.
ReplyDeleteThanks for all of the effort in class!